WARNING: This post contains possible spoilers for the following books: Frankenstein, The Woman in White and The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time. Proceed with caution.
"Since you have preserved my narration... I would not that a mutilated one should go down to posterity." - Victor Frankenstein of Mary Shelley's Frankenstein
There are a number of texts which touch on the idea of unreliable narrators. They could be biased, they may not have all the information, they may be recounting events which they never witnessed, and are therefore only speculating. In some cases, narrators have a completely different view on events, as in the case of Mark Haddon's The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time, in which the narrator is autistic and reports on the events around him quite differently, with very specific details on things which other narrators would likely pass by. There is also the possibility of the work itself being tampered with if, for instance, the frame of the story is that of a diary or a series of letters, they could have been altered by another character within the story. When studying Wilkie Collins' The Woman in White, my English teacher encouraged us to question the validity of Marian's recount through diary extracts as, at the end of her entries, the villain, Count Fosco, writes in her diary. We were led to suspect that her diary had been altered, possibly with entire passages removed by Fosco in order to protect him from being exposed for the crimes he committed.
When characters recount events in which much dialogue takes place, I have always been sceptical as to whether or not the narrator would really be able to take in all the information at the time and report it back perfectly, word for word. If I were to write down a conversation that took place several hours before, I probably wouldn't use quotations and instead use flimsy phrases like 'he said it was a bad idea' because I would be unable to remember his exact wording. Then again, people in real life rarely have the ability to speak so eloquently and with such rich subtext as many novels will have you believe, so some suspension of disbelief is required. Referring back to The Woman in White, Marian's recounts through her diary entries are somewhat justified in having the dialogue flawlessly replicated by her natural gift of a photographic memory, but many other texts seem to imply that characters just remember exactly how every event happened. Apparently they were that impacting and memorable. Or perhaps I'm going prematurely senile.
When reading Mary Shelley's Frankenstein I started to wonder, as the story progressed, how reliable this narration was, as these events were being recounted by more and more narrators. To clarify, at one point in the story, the monster is telling Frankenstein his tale, which Frankenstein dictated to Walton, who was writing the tale in the form of a letter to his sister. Then later, during the monster's tale, he begins retelling the tale of Felix and Safie. I reached the point where it just started to seem ridiculous. I couldn't know at this point if any of the narrative would be accurate as I was reading it, because it had been through three different narrators before it got to Walton's letter, which I was supposedly reading. My suspension of disbelief was strained at best. Then I read a passage in the last chapter in which Walton explains how Frankenstein amended his account, to fix any mistakes, to ensure that the correct story would go down in history. Despite it not being a particularly pressing concern, this did make it seem more believable. Luckily Shelley is a good enough writer that it didn't bother me enough for me to be distracted all through the novel.
So next time you're reading a book, think about what it is that you're actually reading. How reliable do you think your narrator is? Is it a first-person narrative, in the form of a recount, or a third-person narrative, from the point of view of a seemingly omnipotent observer? Perhaps it is told from a random onlooker's perspective, and we only see their interpretation of the events. Or maybe the narrator really is that good at remembering the tiniest detail of every person they encounter. Mind you, some characters seem striking enough to leave enough of an impression that you could never forget that subtle birthmark just above his full, shapely lips, surrounded by just a touch of stubble on his strong, chiselled jaw.
But don't take my word for it, I just escaped from a mental asylum. And I'm a compulsive liar.
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Saturday, 17 July 2010
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Sunday, 31 May 2009
Brighton Rock: Sticky, Tough to Get Through and, in the End, Not All That Satisfying
This is a review I wrote a while ago, I was still honing my reviewing skills then (I still am now, but I think it really shows in this one), but I think it's still worth posting up (I sound very mean in this review, but it honestly did upset me):
Just finished reading Brighton Rock for English (just in time, too, I needed it finished by tomorrow) and I thought it might be worth sharing my opinions on it...
It's awful.
No no, I obviously have more to say on it than that, but my overall review can be effectively summed up in two words, and that's never good. In fact, I could easily drop the 'it's' so now it's in real trouble.
Elaborating on my point a little more...
The storyline is weak and dull and the author adds a depressing pessimistic edge to try and make up for it, and it doesn't make it any better.
The characters are so furiously hateable that I could feel next to no sympathy for any of them, and I think if I had it would have had a bigger impact on me at the end than just a long, quiet 'meh'. I also hated how the 'good' character is so annoying I started to hope she would die as quickly and unneccesarily brutally as possible (and it wasn't exactly outside the nature of the book for that to happen). It was also irritating to see Greene try and give the characters flaws. There's nothing wrong with giving characters flaws, in fact, I'm all for it, but he just kept going on about it, like I didn't catch it the first time. I knew Pinkie was a virgin the first time you said it, it wasn't necessary to mention it at every possible opportunity, that's just embarrassing him.
Above all, and this is something that really bothers me because it's considered a 'classic' and people think it's such a wonderful book: it's badly written. The narrative is lifeless and it drags. Twice I was sitting in the common room trying furiously to keep my eyes open during an 'intense' scene in a 'thriller' novel. There was no thrill involved: show me the thrill. There were even errors in the writing: the author obviously has never heard of the wacky new trend of proof reading. I've only been writing for about three or four years and even I know you have to read through your work at least once before even considering giving it to a publisher (knowing me, I will have made some kind of mistake in this blog, just for irony's sake). I'm not sure why the publisher accepted it: maybe because the author had already published things before, and they just took it without a second's thought. Great. Also I think that no one ever told the author about the rule: when a new character is speaking, put their dialogue on a new line. It's hard enough to understand who's saying what when you refer to everybody as 'the Boy' or something along those lines, but when everything is dotted around everywhere it just confused me and it seriously broke the flow.
Basically, the whole book seemed like something was missing. I had the odd feeling that it was just one draft away from being an okay novel, but it just didn't cut it with me. The ending was also rather sudden and unsatisfying. I'm sure that's what the author was going for, fitting with the theme and all that, but I just think that Pinkie (the 'bad' character, who turned out to be the one I hated the least, funnily enough) deserved a better send-out than the one he got. Don't get me wrong, the character deserved everything he got, it's just that his last scene was weak to say the least.
In the end, all I can really say is that if I didn't have to read this for school, I would have given up about halfway through. There's only so much waffle I can handle, and I don't like forcing myself to like a book. Plenty of authors work hard to make their books good so I can like them without even trying: Stephen King, Elizabeth Laird, Kevin Brooks and Catherine Ford, Jane Austen, the list goes on. Basically: I don't care if a book is a classic, if it's terrible, I won't strain myself to like it. The authors are the ones getting paid to do the work, so they should do it properly.
Oh, and Greene obviously has an obsession with breasts. Seriously, they're everywhere in that book.
Just finished reading Brighton Rock for English (just in time, too, I needed it finished by tomorrow) and I thought it might be worth sharing my opinions on it...
It's awful.
No no, I obviously have more to say on it than that, but my overall review can be effectively summed up in two words, and that's never good. In fact, I could easily drop the 'it's' so now it's in real trouble.
Elaborating on my point a little more...
The storyline is weak and dull and the author adds a depressing pessimistic edge to try and make up for it, and it doesn't make it any better.
The characters are so furiously hateable that I could feel next to no sympathy for any of them, and I think if I had it would have had a bigger impact on me at the end than just a long, quiet 'meh'. I also hated how the 'good' character is so annoying I started to hope she would die as quickly and unneccesarily brutally as possible (and it wasn't exactly outside the nature of the book for that to happen). It was also irritating to see Greene try and give the characters flaws. There's nothing wrong with giving characters flaws, in fact, I'm all for it, but he just kept going on about it, like I didn't catch it the first time. I knew Pinkie was a virgin the first time you said it, it wasn't necessary to mention it at every possible opportunity, that's just embarrassing him.
Above all, and this is something that really bothers me because it's considered a 'classic' and people think it's such a wonderful book: it's badly written. The narrative is lifeless and it drags. Twice I was sitting in the common room trying furiously to keep my eyes open during an 'intense' scene in a 'thriller' novel. There was no thrill involved: show me the thrill. There were even errors in the writing: the author obviously has never heard of the wacky new trend of proof reading. I've only been writing for about three or four years and even I know you have to read through your work at least once before even considering giving it to a publisher (knowing me, I will have made some kind of mistake in this blog, just for irony's sake). I'm not sure why the publisher accepted it: maybe because the author had already published things before, and they just took it without a second's thought. Great. Also I think that no one ever told the author about the rule: when a new character is speaking, put their dialogue on a new line. It's hard enough to understand who's saying what when you refer to everybody as 'the Boy' or something along those lines, but when everything is dotted around everywhere it just confused me and it seriously broke the flow.
Basically, the whole book seemed like something was missing. I had the odd feeling that it was just one draft away from being an okay novel, but it just didn't cut it with me. The ending was also rather sudden and unsatisfying. I'm sure that's what the author was going for, fitting with the theme and all that, but I just think that Pinkie (the 'bad' character, who turned out to be the one I hated the least, funnily enough) deserved a better send-out than the one he got. Don't get me wrong, the character deserved everything he got, it's just that his last scene was weak to say the least.
In the end, all I can really say is that if I didn't have to read this for school, I would have given up about halfway through. There's only so much waffle I can handle, and I don't like forcing myself to like a book. Plenty of authors work hard to make their books good so I can like them without even trying: Stephen King, Elizabeth Laird, Kevin Brooks and Catherine Ford, Jane Austen, the list goes on. Basically: I don't care if a book is a classic, if it's terrible, I won't strain myself to like it. The authors are the ones getting paid to do the work, so they should do it properly.
Oh, and Greene obviously has an obsession with breasts. Seriously, they're everywhere in that book.
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